Heya guys..this stuff is all occ so feel free to ask anything..let me start off by saying this whole story is in third person..except for certain speeches etc.
So..it took me maybe 15 min. to think of, write, type and post the first Chapter of Hazel. I can not say if Scout is dead or not. in Chapter two I'm going beyond SJS bringing in the investigation you will know more then.
When I first said "I may have killed myself off" on the coalition channel everyone was saying "WHAT!?" and stuff. Some people said the story was blunt, didn't explain much ((Rin <.< >.>)) and moved to fast. Again I'm taking my time with Part. 2. It'll also be longer and move dragged out
as of right now I have the story written down..typed on my typewriter (yeah..i have one..got a problem lol) and going through the final editing.
So..heres the first Sneak Peak at Hazel Part. 2..enjoy
The halls were buzzing the next day at St. Josephs. People spread rumors, knocked over new kids books and other things. No one really noticed that Scout was missing untill later. Scout always went to the roof and watched the sun go down. It was something he had done since he had first landed on Earth. The usal gang was on the roof waiting for Scout..he skipped classes sometimes but never missed this. It was his birthday and Jones, Cricket, Mimi, Franky, Mis, Det and a few other planned to surprise him
HA!..thats all you get..now this intro may change. I used all names without permission so ha..sue me