Mistake: Chapter 1 (Closed)
Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 1:25 am
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Elle sat in the Rikti Crash Site, just out of the DMZ looking at the downed Rikti Saucer. She'd been wandering though the mobs of the aliens which for once they could strike a critical blow and make this pain in her heart just leave her. Sadly they all failed, breaking their swords on contact or their blasts flying off in some random angle as the girl proved that the only chink in her armor was her heart behind it. She was the strongest being some had ever seen and documented but she was also the most human and fragile of them all. She'd never seen what society had become. Her life was a lie until she escaped, her powers getting her thrown out of her house, scorned by her father. Now her powers had killed things, because she couldn't control herself. She'd destroyed life because she was careless.
She sank to her knees on the roof, the Rikti smashed their swords and shot at her with their energy weapons, nothing had made a dent yet and like the rest shattered off her.
"Leave me alone..." Kirra begged.
The Rikti did not comply and attacked again. Kirra closed her eyes, her sorrow went to her balled fist and she let out a scream. The shock way blew out the buildings windows and the ensuing explosion was visible from halfway across Crey's Folly. Kirra stood on the collapsing rooftop, the crater below her was smoking, the Rikti were laid out across the land scape intact and unconscious. She never wante to kill anyone but she did because she was careless. She sank back to her knees causing the building to implode on itself with the rubble crumbling down around her. She never noticed any of it.
She wanted silence, and to be left alone. She want someone to tell her it was okay and that none of this was real and she was back at home with her father and this was just a dream. She wanted things she could never have. She could always hear herself and she knew her home was gone. Her dad was right though, her powers were ruining her life. If she didn't have them, she'd just be a normal girl, free of all these problems. This contempt herself only made her more confused. These powers seemed like a god send. She really could change the world, she could make the difference but now she was changing herself into a monster and destroying buildings and people's lives all in a matter of seconds. She never wanted to be violent, she just wanted them to comply and when they didn't, a few quick hooks and they'd fall down. Now it was all different, with things going 180 and her looking in on herself as something more horrible then the things she'd put away.
"Father..." Elle muttered underneath the rubble, "Father...l you were right." Elle whined.
"I'm sorry, I want to go back home. I want to finishing my school, I want to marry a rich man and be a good wife. I don't want to be a super hero, or a killer. I don't want any of it!" Elle cried.
The ever present tears began streaming down her cheeks again. She wanted this to be something great and it was ugly. It was beautiful and now it was gruesome. She cried with the rubble piled on her. She wanted it to be dark and silent while she cried herself to sleep. Her mind rested for once as her emotional exhaustion finally got the better of her and sent her into the darkness under the collapsed building rubble.
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Elle sat in the Rikti Crash Site, just out of the DMZ looking at the downed Rikti Saucer. She'd been wandering though the mobs of the aliens which for once they could strike a critical blow and make this pain in her heart just leave her. Sadly they all failed, breaking their swords on contact or their blasts flying off in some random angle as the girl proved that the only chink in her armor was her heart behind it. She was the strongest being some had ever seen and documented but she was also the most human and fragile of them all. She'd never seen what society had become. Her life was a lie until she escaped, her powers getting her thrown out of her house, scorned by her father. Now her powers had killed things, because she couldn't control herself. She'd destroyed life because she was careless.
She sank to her knees on the roof, the Rikti smashed their swords and shot at her with their energy weapons, nothing had made a dent yet and like the rest shattered off her.
"Leave me alone..." Kirra begged.
The Rikti did not comply and attacked again. Kirra closed her eyes, her sorrow went to her balled fist and she let out a scream. The shock way blew out the buildings windows and the ensuing explosion was visible from halfway across Crey's Folly. Kirra stood on the collapsing rooftop, the crater below her was smoking, the Rikti were laid out across the land scape intact and unconscious. She never wante to kill anyone but she did because she was careless. She sank back to her knees causing the building to implode on itself with the rubble crumbling down around her. She never noticed any of it.
She wanted silence, and to be left alone. She want someone to tell her it was okay and that none of this was real and she was back at home with her father and this was just a dream. She wanted things she could never have. She could always hear herself and she knew her home was gone. Her dad was right though, her powers were ruining her life. If she didn't have them, she'd just be a normal girl, free of all these problems. This contempt herself only made her more confused. These powers seemed like a god send. She really could change the world, she could make the difference but now she was changing herself into a monster and destroying buildings and people's lives all in a matter of seconds. She never wanted to be violent, she just wanted them to comply and when they didn't, a few quick hooks and they'd fall down. Now it was all different, with things going 180 and her looking in on herself as something more horrible then the things she'd put away.
"Father..." Elle muttered underneath the rubble, "Father...l you were right." Elle whined.
"I'm sorry, I want to go back home. I want to finishing my school, I want to marry a rich man and be a good wife. I don't want to be a super hero, or a killer. I don't want any of it!" Elle cried.
The ever present tears began streaming down her cheeks again. She wanted this to be something great and it was ugly. It was beautiful and now it was gruesome. She cried with the rubble piled on her. She wanted it to be dark and silent while she cried herself to sleep. Her mind rested for once as her emotional exhaustion finally got the better of her and sent her into the darkness under the collapsed building rubble.